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PostPosted: 16 Jun 2012, 15:23 
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I have just written a little article on Wikipedia about the Umbani glide bomb.
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Denel_Dynamics_Umbani
I'd like to know what you guys and gals think of it before other Wikipedia editors rip it to shreds!


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PostPosted: 17 Jun 2012, 00:02 
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Useful, probably more or less correct! You know more about this than I do.

But please change the reference title "DefenceWeb - Umbani becomes first SA weapon trailed off Hawk" to "DefenceWeb - Umbani becomes first SA weapon trialled off Hawk". Yes, I know, DefenceWeb got it wrong first.


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PostPosted: 17 Jun 2012, 08:37 
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DefenceWeb will have to fix it first, because citations on Wikipedia must follow the source exactly.
I can tag it with (sic) but that just draws attention to the mistake.


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PostPosted: 17 Jun 2012, 14:22 
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Great work Roger :smt023

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PostPosted: 17 Jun 2012, 15:43 
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Nice. :smt023
How about a picture or two?


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PostPosted: 17 Jun 2012, 19:07 
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jeffreynic wrote:
Nice. :smt023
How about a picture or two?


Kremlin has very kindly sent me a few pics - I'll get one into the article as soon as I've figured out the legalities and technicalities.


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PostPosted: 18 Jun 2012, 11:13 
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Roger the Dodger wrote:
DefenceWeb will have to fix it first, because citations on Wikipedia must follow the source exactly.
I can tag it with (sic) but that just draws attention to the mistake.
Sounds logical.

I'd say tag it with (sic) in order to draw attention to a correction which is needed! People do say I'm overly-critical at times, though.


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